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Monday, 9 March 2009

Fiveth Assigment of Paragraph Writting

My Boarding House

Every student from different places needs boarding house for live. So do I. Because I come from Kefa and I don't have family here. My boarding house is one of the boarding houses in papringan. It is in ampel street. The right side of my boarding house is a small shop, which sells many kinds of soft drinks, on the left is a small laundry shop, and on the front is a small comics rental. If I want to go to campus, I just go north. It is about 10-15 minutes on foot. Then if I go south, I will arrive in Solo street.

My boarding house isn't too big, but it has 2 floors. And I have took a room on the 2nd floor. My boarding house has 24 rooms for rent. 10 rooms on the 1st floor and 14 rooms on the 2nd floor. It has 2 kinds of rooms. Another is 3x3 meters and the other is 3x4 meters. And each room facilitated by a bed, a table, a chair, a cupboard, a mirror and a curtain. The price also different. The smallest room costs Rp. 275.000 and the biggest one costs Rp. 300.000. My boarding house also has a kitchen, a dinning room, a living room, a waiting room, a store-room, a garage and 8 bathrooms ( 4 bathrooms on the 1st floor and the others on the 2nd floor ).

The area inside my boarding house is very clean and the air also fresh. There are many plants inside the boarding house. So no pollution there. That really makes me comfort. The owners and the people who live there also friendly. So, I think it's the best boarding house.

So, girls (not boys, because it's a women boarding house), if you are confused about finding the comfortable boarding house, just come here in my boarding house. Then you will find the comfortable place for live. ^^

3 comments:

  1. what if a man visits you???
    outside the house????

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  2. Wow...that's good. You have good acknowledgement of English grammatical structures, but there are still some mistakes.
    In the first paragraph, you wrote "...for live." Well, it should be "for living" or "to live".
    In the third paragraph, you wrote "...and the air also fresh." Well, you missed a predicate there... It should be "the air is also fresh".
    Anyway...that's a good job of yours...
    Keep smiling and keep praying...

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  3. 1 more comment...it should be "fifth", not "fiveth".

    JBU

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