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Monday, 23 March 2009

Sixth Assigment of Paragraph Writting

My Habitual Activities

I don’t have an accurate time for waking up in the morning. That depends on when I start my daily activities. That is one of my bad habits. I usually do not take my breakfast, because I live in boarding house and no body prepares my breakfast like my mother. Hehehehe. So, I never take my breakfast since I lived in the boarding house. I always take a bath 1 hour before I go to campus, then I prepare myself to go to campus. I always go to campus 15 minutes before the time for my first class in that day. I go to campus on foot and it takes 10-15 minutes. Then I begin my study activities until finish, and then I take my lunch with my friends, and go back to my boarding house. Sometimes I take a nap, but usually not. Then I take a bath and browsing Internet. And this is my bad habit, too that I never study if no exams or homework. Huaaaaaaa. I must change my bad habits. I always make my room tidy before I go to sleep and then I take 30 minutes until 1 hour for my private prayer and reading bible. But in these later weeks I was lazy to do my private prayer. Oh my God, forgive me. Then after that I finish my day with night prayer. I usually go to sleep at midnight, also bad habit. Huuuufffftttt T.T

9 comments:

  1. I think you should fly to the campus, because your boarding house to campus is so far

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  2. knock knock...
    siana, I think you can make it longer than one paragraph,,,, good writing,,,,

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  3. Pious girl. Good girl. Why don't you just ride a Komodo to go to campus?

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  4. good,but it'd be better if you make it longer...

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  5. never give up...
    it's not bad habit, you can be better if you have desire...
    I proud of you because you always clean your room before you sleep hehehe
    don't be lazy to pray,,ok girl

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  6. so many bad habits ha? hahahaha

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  7. good habit, but the article is to short...

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  8. Well...such a well-constructed text. Just some corrections:
    1. Don't (on the first line)
    Please, use "do not" in formal writing. OK...

    2. That depends on when (om the second line)
    It should be "that depends on what time".

    3. use "a boarding house" (line 4)

    4. lived (line 6)
    Use present tense, coz you still live in that boarding house.

    5. browsing (line 13)
    Before the word "and", you use V1 (take a bath), but use present participle (browsing) after the word "and". Well, that's wrong. the formula is like this (... and ... = V1 and V1, N and N, Adj and Adj).

    How could you forget to pray?
    Just keep praying and believing...and shall your life be much easier...and may Jesus be with you...

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  9. well...My job was being stolen by Mr.Kurnia then...hoh...

    Too short writing...

    You can make it for 2 or 3 paragraphs...

    I am sure you can do that...

    keep on learning...

    Piss out

    NB: study only when we have an exam is normal not bad...hehehe...

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